2008年12月21日 星期日

加納的指引世界

睜開眼睛時,加納看見一片灰矇矇的天空。他奮力撐起身子,奈何身體太虛弱,坐不起來。


離加納不遠處,有兩雙純白的鞋子。鞋子的主人,正在熱切地討論著一件事情:


「他好像快不行了,怎麼辦?」


「根據指引,我們應該先通知上級,然後等他們下達命令!」


「但那最少要花上一天的時間呢!他能撐那麼久嗎?」


「我們一定要按指引辦事,不然出了亂子,由誰負責?」


「不過……


「別說了,我立即去報告上級,說不定他還有一線生機?」


達達達的腳步聲,漸行漸遠。這時候,加納忽然覺得自己的身體變得很輕很輕,然後轉瞬間,他便飄上了半空。


正當加納要融進灰矇矇的天空之際,他回頭望向地面,看見自己倒卧在柏油路上,然後離他約十步處,有一個穿著白衣白鞋的男子。那個男子用很焦慮的眼神望著地上的加納,但他始終沒踏前過半步。


10 則留言:

  1. 乜咁快就cut啦?!幾時有下集呀?
    [版主回覆12/22/2008 21:55:00] 井兄:冇下集啦,只是一時有感而發罷了。

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  2. Latest News:   A factory building was knocked down early this afternoon with 300 people die inside due to a massive explosion caused by a bottle gas delivery van with full load of bottle gases which was parked in less than 100 yards away from a fire station........An eye witness told us that he had tried to call for urgent help from the nearby fire station 25 mins before the explosion, but his urgent appeal was simply ignored and that he was told to phone 999 instead.......A Spoke Person from the Fire Service has just released a statement: “Fire Service offers their condolence to the fire’s victims, this tragedy is simply an accident and that no one is to be blamed.   Fire Service is a discipline force, we all need to follow orders, guidelines and rules, and no one is allowed to dispatch any fire engine without any order from the control room. A fire officer was indeed approached by a civilian about a vehicle fire this afternoon while he was on stand-by duty at the fire station, the officer did advise the civilian to phone 999 and that he had fulfill his obligations in comply with our guidelines."
    [版主回覆12/22/2008 21:58:00]Isn't it horrible that we are surrounded by such people?
    I don't think apologies would make any difference, but at least better than insisting that the man did the right thing.

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  3. 今天放工回家聽到新聞﹗悲哀﹗
    [版主回覆12/22/2008 21:59:00]霜儀:那人大概是見慣了死亡,所以變得麻木了

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  4. 好野!有故仔睇。是科幻嗎?還是愛情?
    [版主回覆12/22/2008 22:00:00]南爾:只是剎那的感覺,不是故事來的啦

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  5. 現實上演了
    [版主回覆12/22/2008 22:00:00]無蹟:何其悲哀!

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  6. 栗子妹:故事的下半部如下
    「加納,你命該如此。」一位天神在灰矇矇的天空中迎接了加納,祂冷漠得一點悲憐的心也沒有。
    「我不服!」加納聲嘶力竭的喊著。
    天神伸出左手一把的拉著加納的頭髮,猛力地拉了他一下,加納的頭就栽在雲深之處。
    「我不服呀!」加納用了最後一絲的氣狂吼。
    天神冷冷一笑:「傻瓜,你還不服氣?人家的指引不是清清楚楚的說明了嗎?」
    「說明甚麼?」加納勉力從雲中把頭伸回望向天神。
    「不是說得很清楚你死你賤嗎?走吧 ~~~」天神一伸腳把加納的頭踢回那雲深之處。
    這個時候,天神再次回頭望向地面,然後搖頭嘆息:「唉 ~~~ 畜牲尚有一點人性,反而人比畜牲都不如!」
    加納,你好好地安息吧!其實他們已經做得好好了,因為他們讓你這樣快的死去!
     
     
    [版主回覆12/26/2008 19:21:00]想不到慧行先生除了寫詩了得,寫故事更是高手呢!
    不過這樣的結局,實在教人悲哀。

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  7. "那個男子用很焦慮的眼神望著地上的加納,但他 始終沒踏前過半步 。" 那個職員真的是工作到太麻木了, 忘了什麼是"人命"!!! 每個人也是艱辛地從母腹中出來的, 不能一聲"規矩"便漠視人命!

     
    [版主回覆12/26/2008 19:26:00]芝:後來我再想想,麻木其實是人體的一種保護程式。因為若情感起伏太大,人體會受不了的。
    或許那位職員,至今仍不覺得自己有甚麼過失,但在旁人眼中,他間接害死了一條人命。

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  8. 一個字: 唉!
    [版主回覆12/26/2008 19:28:00]BS2: 過幾天,新聞報導說有位醫生在政府診所門外救了一位病人。但這樣能補償失去了的人命嗎?

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  9. 係因為見到則新聞嗎?
    [版主回覆12/26/2008 19:31:00]Nicole: 算是導火線吧?

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  10. What make human beings difference from robots and other animals are human beings have intelligence and been blessed to have self-awarenes and humanity.  Sadly, it seems that these days, there are not many people using these to prove that they still have these. 
    [版主回覆12/26/2008 19:34:00]nobody: We are too busy with work and personal matters. Few of us have time for people other than family members.

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